Right on Brandon, this version has a much better pace to it. I liked the transitions, the text, but most of all the pacing of the cuts. It kept my interest because it was clear what was going on and didn't lag in any part. Also, it allowed the quality of the camera work to really come out. Well done.
This version is more obvious about the story! I like what you did with her getting ready. It didn't seem to take as long as the first cut. Scott is right, the pacing is better! Good job.
Yes~ the new clips added were perfect, the sequence of her waiting for the boyfriend really pushed why she was so angry this time around. I'm so glad half the video isn't her getting ready anymore. I still really love the clip where she slams the railing angry.
Right on Brandon, this version has a much better pace to it. I liked the transitions, the text, but most of all the pacing of the cuts. It kept my interest because it was clear what was going on and didn't lag in any part. Also, it allowed the quality of the camera work to really come out. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis version works a lot better! Nice job on the editing. The story is much more clear this time around.
ReplyDeleteThis version is more obvious about the story! I like what you did with her getting ready. It didn't seem to take as long as the first cut. Scott is right, the pacing is better! Good job.
ReplyDelete-Bridget
Yes~ the new clips added were perfect, the sequence of her waiting for the boyfriend really pushed why she was so angry this time around.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad half the video isn't her getting ready anymore. I still really love the clip where she slams the railing angry.